B2 Pre-Advanced Writing · Lesson 21

Write an Advantages and Disadvantages Essay

A balanced advantages-and-disadvantages essay weighs trade-offs rather than treating every benefit and drawback as equally important.

B2 Pre-AdvancedAdvantages-disadvantages essay35 min210–225 words
Lesson progress
Explanation · 1 / 4
Study the model carefully: both practice exercises ask questions about this exact text.

You will learn to organise both sides by significance, qualify claims, compare short- and long-term effects, and reach a position based on the strongest evidence.

Model text

Should Companies Allow Employees to Choose Their Own Working Hours? Flexible working hours allow employees to decide when they begin and finish work, provided they complete the required hours and remain available for essential meetings. This approach can offer significant benefits, although it also creates management challenges. The main advantage is that employees can organise work around periods when they are most productive and around responsibilities such as childcare or commuting. Someone who concentrates best early in the morning may complete difficult tasks before the office becomes busy, while another employee can avoid travelling at peak time. Greater control may improve job satisfaction because workers are judged more by results than attendance. However, complete flexibility can make collaboration harder. If team members rarely overlap, simple questions may take hours to resolve, and newer employees can find it difficult to learn informally from colleagues. Managers may also struggle to distinguish genuine flexibility from poor availability unless expectations are clearly defined. In my view, the advantages are stronger, but only when flexibility operates within shared limits. Companies should establish several core hours when everyone is reachable and allow employees to arrange the rest of their schedule independently. This preserves much of the personal benefit without turning teamwork into a constant scheduling problem. The strongest policy is therefore not total freedom, but structured flexibility.

How to write

1
Define the policy neutrally
2
Develop major advantages with realistic examples
3
Develop disadvantages of similar importance
4
Compare the weight of both sides
5
State a position with conditions rather than an absolute claim

Useful language

provided that...The main advantage...while...However,...In my view,... but only when...therefore...

B2 Pre-Advanced focus: Develop ideas with specific evidence, varied linking, precise vocabulary, and a register appropriate to the text type.

Exercises:
Exercise 1 · Language in the model text

Write an Advantages and Disadvantages Essay

Read the model text closely. Analyse the exact grammar, vocabulary, linking, stance, and register choices.

Answer questions about this lesson’s unique model text.
Exercise 1 · 2 / 4
You need at least 5 correct answers out of 6.
Which excerpt most clearly performs this writing move: “Define the policy neutrally”?
What is the main writing function of “while another employee” in “Someone who concentrates best early in the morning may complete difficult tasks before the office becomes busy, while anothe…”?
Which excerpt best demonstrates this writing move: “Develop disadvantages of similar importance”?
Why does the writer use “In my view, the advantages are stronger, but only when” in “In my view, the advantages are stronger, but only when flexibility operates within shared limits.”?
What does “In my view, the advantages are stronger, but only when flexibility operates within shared limits.” mainly achieve in this model?
Why is “The strongest policy is therefore not total freedom, but structured flexibility.” effective near the end of the text?
Exercise 2 · Structure and development

Write an Advantages and Disadvantages Essay

Read the model text closely. Analyse how its ideas are ordered, developed, connected, and concluded.

Answer questions about this lesson’s unique model text.
Exercise 2 · 3 / 4
You need at least 5 correct answers out of 6.
Where does “Write an Advantages and Disadvantages Essay” first establish its central situation or purpose?
Which detail does the most work to develop the second stage of the text: “Develop major advantages with realistic examples”?
Why does “However, complete flexibility can make collaboration harder.” follow the preceding idea “Greater control may improve job satisfaction because workers are judged more by results than a…”?
What structural role does “In my view, the advantages are stronger, but only when flexibility operates within shared limits.” play in this model?
Why does the model place “The strongest policy is therefore not total freedom, but structured flexibility.” near the end?
Which sequence best represents the organisation of “Write an Advantages and Disadvantages Essay”?
Exercise 3 · Independent writing

Write an Advantages and Disadvantages Essay

Apply the writing skills you analysed in this lesson’s model text.

Complete the writing task independently.
Exercise 3 · 4 / 4
Write 210–225 words. Up to 235 words is accepted.
Your task

Present significant advantages and disadvantages, qualify each side, and reach a justified position. Use your own ideas and examples; do not copy the model text.

  • Introduce the issue and make the scope clear
  • Develop significant advantages with explanation or examples
  • Develop significant disadvantages with explanation or examples
  • Use qualification rather than absolute claims
  • State a justified final position
  • Use balanced linking between the two sides
provided that...The main advantage...while...However,...In my view,... but only when...therefore...
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Write about 210–225 words
Introduce the issue and make the scope clear
Develop significant advantages with explanation or examples
Develop significant disadvantages with explanation or examples
Use qualification rather than absolute claims
State a justified final position
Use balanced linking between the two sides
Use at least 9 clear sentences
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