B1 Writing · Lesson 2

Describe a Person Who Influenced You

Learn to describe a person clearly and explain, with examples, how that person influenced you.

B1Descriptive paragraph25 min90–100 words
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Explanation · 1 / 4

Study the structure and model before completing the three exercises.

Write a well-organised description of an influential person using personality adjectives, examples, before-and-after ideas, reasons, and a personal reflection.

Model text

One person who has influenced me a lot is my former English teacher, Mr Lewis. He was patient, energetic, and always interested in his students' ideas. Before I joined his class, I was afraid of making mistakes when I spoke English. He encouraged me to speak more and reminded me that mistakes are part of learning. Because of his support, I became much more confident. I still remember his advice when I face something difficult: prepare well, try your best, and do not be afraid to improve slowly. His attitude changed the way I think about learning new skills.

How to write

1
Introduce the person and your relationship

One person who influenced me...

2
Describe two or three qualities

He/She was...

3
Give a specific example of what the person did

What I admired most was...

4
Explain how the person influenced you

For example,...

5
Finish with what you still remember or use today

Because of...

Useful phrases

One person who influenced me...
He/She was...
What I admired most was...
For example,...
Because of...
Before I...
After that...
He/She encouraged me to...
I still remember...
This changed the way I...

Language focus

Build connected B1 writing:

Use clear topic sentences and support them with specific details.

Connect ideas with words such as because, however, for example, although, finally when they fit the task.

Develop, do not only list:

Explain why, add an example, or show a result.

Use a mix of simple and longer sentences, but keep every sentence easy to understand.

Remember:
At B1, your reader should be able to follow the text from beginning to end without guessing how the ideas connect.
Specific details and reasons make your writing stronger than general statements.
Exercises:
Exercise 1 · Language

Choose the best B1 language

Choose natural language that fits this writing task.

Practise useful language.
Exercise 1 · 2 / 4

You need at least 5 correct answers out of 6 to complete this exercise.

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Which option is the best language for this part of the task?
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Which option is the best language for this part of the task?
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Which option is the best language for this part of the task?
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Which option is the best language for this part of the task?
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Which option is the best language for this part of the task?
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Which option is the best language for this part of the task?
Exercise 2 · Structure

Build the text in a clear order

Choose the clearest organisation for this type of B1 writing.

Practise the five-step structure.
Exercise 2 · 3 / 4

You need at least 5 correct answers out of 6 to complete this exercise.

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What should you do first?
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What is the best second step?
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Which step belongs in the middle of the text?
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What should come before the final sentence or closing?
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What is the best final step?
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Which order is clearest?
Exercise 3 · Writing

Describe a Person Who Influenced You

Learn to describe a person clearly and explain, with examples, how that person influenced you.

Complete the second B1 Writing lesson.
Exercise 3 · 4 / 4

Write about 90–100 words and develop your ideas clearly.

Your task

Describe a person who influenced you. Explain who the person is, what qualities they have, what they did, and how they affected you.

  • Identify the person and your relationship.
  • Describe at least two personal qualities.
  • Give at least one specific example.
  • Explain the influence clearly.
  • Use a reason or result linker.
  • Finish with a personal reflection.
One person who influenced me...He/She was...What I admired most was...For example,...Because of...Before I...After that...He/She encouraged me to...I still remember...This changed the way I...
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Quick check
Write about 90–100 words
Identify a person clearly
Use at least two descriptive qualities
Give a specific example
Explain the influence
Show a result or change
End with a reflection
Use clear complete sentences and connected ideas
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