B2 Pre-Advanced Writing · Lesson 16

Compare and Evaluate Two Options in a Review

Comparative reviews are most useful when both options are judged by the same criteria and the final recommendation reflects different users' needs.

B2 Pre-AdvancedComparative review35 min195–205 words
Lesson progress
Explanation · 1 / 4
Study the model carefully: both practice exercises ask questions about this exact text.

You will learn to compare two options consistently, explain meaningful trade-offs, avoid one-sided comparison, and justify which choice suits different situations.

Model text

CityCycle vs MetroPass: Which Subscription Is Better? I used both CityCycle and MetroPass for a month while commuting across the city. Although they solve the same basic problem, they suit different routines. CityCycle costs slightly less and gives unlimited thirty-minute bicycle journeys. The app shows available bikes clearly, and for trips under three kilometres I often reached my destination faster than by public transport. Its main weakness is reliability: during rain or busy evenings, finding a bicycle or an empty return dock can be difficult. MetroPass is more expensive, but it covers buses, trams, and the underground with no daily journey limit. It is therefore much more dependable for longer distances or bad weather. On the other hand, crowded services at peak times can make short journeys surprisingly slow, especially when a transfer is required. For me, CityCycle offered better value because most of my journeys were short and flexible. However, I would choose MetroPass if I had a fixed commute across several districts. CityCycle rewards people who can adapt their route and timing; MetroPass costs more but removes more uncertainty. The better subscription depends less on price than on how predictable your daily travel needs to be.

How to write

1
Establish common criteria before comparing
2
Evaluate the first option with strengths and limitations
3
Evaluate the second option using the same needs
4
Explain your own preference with a reason
5
Recommend differently according to user needs

Useful language

Although they...Its main weakness...On the other hand,...For me,... because...I would choose... if...depends less on... than on...

B2 Pre-Advanced focus: Develop ideas with specific evidence, varied linking, precise vocabulary, and a register appropriate to the text type.

Exercises:
Exercise 1 · Language in the model text

Compare and Evaluate Two Options in a Review

Read the model text closely. Analyse the exact grammar, vocabulary, linking, stance, and register choices.

Answer questions about this lesson’s unique model text.
Exercise 1 · 2 / 4
You need at least 5 correct answers out of 6.
Which excerpt most clearly performs this writing move: “Establish common criteria before comparing”?
What is the main writing function of “On the other hand” in “On the other hand, crowded services at peak times can make short journeys surprisingly slow, especially when a transfer is r…”?
Which excerpt best demonstrates this writing move: “Evaluate the second option using the same needs”?
Why does the writer use “I would choose MetroPass if” in “However, I would choose MetroPass if I had a fixed commute across several districts.”?
What does “For me, CityCycle offered better value because most of my journeys were short and flexible.” mainly achieve in this model?
Why is “However, I would choose MetroPass if I had a fixed commute across several districts.” effective near the end of the text?
Exercise 2 · Structure and development

Compare and Evaluate Two Options in a Review

Read the model text closely. Analyse how its ideas are ordered, developed, connected, and concluded.

Answer questions about this lesson’s unique model text.
Exercise 2 · 3 / 4
You need at least 5 correct answers out of 6.
Where does “Compare and Evaluate Two Options in a Review” first establish its central situation or purpose?
Which detail does the most work to develop the second stage of the text: “Evaluate the first option with strengths and limitations”?
Why does “MetroPass is more expensive, but it covers buses, trams, and the underground with no daily journey limit.” follow the preceding idea “Its main weakness is reliability: during rain or busy evenings, finding a bicycle or an empty…”?
What structural role does “For me, CityCycle offered better value because most of my journeys were short and flexible.” play in this model?
Why does the model place “However, I would choose MetroPass if I had a fixed commute across several districts.” near the end?
Which sequence best represents the organisation of “Compare and Evaluate Two Options in a Review”?
Exercise 3 · Independent writing

Compare and Evaluate Two Options in a Review

Apply the writing skills you analysed in this lesson’s model text.

Complete the writing task independently.
Exercise 3 · 4 / 4
Write 195–205 words. Up to 215 words is accepted.
Your task

Compare two options using consistent criteria and explain which option suits different users or situations. Use your own ideas and examples; do not copy the model text.

  • Identify clearly what is being reviewed or compared
  • Evaluate strengths and weaknesses using specific evidence
  • Use comparison or contrast language accurately
  • Apply consistent criteria rather than listing random features
  • Give a recommendation or judgement suited to a user or audience
  • Finish with a clear overall evaluation
Although they...Its main weakness...On the other hand,...For me,... because...I would choose... if...depends less on... than on...
Your writing
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Quick check
Write about 195–205 words
Identify clearly what is being reviewed or compared
Evaluate strengths and weaknesses using specific evidence
Use comparison or contrast language accurately
Apply consistent criteria rather than listing random features
Give a recommendation or judgement suited to a user or audience
Finish with a clear overall evaluation
Use at least 9 clear sentences
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